套路:Plot structure
People’s view/opinions/ideas...on...vary from person to person.Some people think that...they hold this opinion because...However, others hold that...
As to me, I am in favor of the first/second idea.The following are the reasons of/for my choice/personal inclination. First, while it is true that...,it doesn’t mean that...Besides,...Admittedly,...but this is not to say that...
Therefore/in a word/from the forgoing,...
【范文】 My View on Donating Blood
People’s ideas about donating blood vary from person to person.Some people think that it is glorious to donate blood. They hold this opinion because those who are in urgent need of blood can be saved.However,others hold that it is foolish for people to donate blood.In their opinion,blood is very precious and losing 200ml or more may do harm to their health.
As to me, I am in favor of the first idea.The following are the reasons for my choice.First,while it is true that the loss of too much blood is dangerous to one’s health,it does not mean that donating a little blood is also harmful.On the contrary,doctors say that donating a little blood can promote metabolism.Second,there are many people who need our help. If my little donation of blood can pull back somebody on the way to death,will there be anything that can make me happier?
In a word, donating blood is glorious.
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Nowadays,...plays an important part/role in...(is/are popular around us). Like everything else,...has/have both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally,the advantages can be listed as follows.
First,...Besides,...Most important of all,...
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with,...to make matters worse/worst of all,...
Through the above analysis, I believe that the advantages/positive aspects outweigh the disadvantages/negative ones. Therefore,...
【范文】 Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Tutoring
Nowadays, private tutoring is popular around us. A recent investigation shows that about 80%of pupils have private tutors. Like everything else, private tutoring has both favorable and unfavorable aspects.
Generally,the advantages can be listed as follows. First, private tutoring is usually one-to-one,the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the students;and teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point.Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils, indeed.
But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, it takes up so much of the pupils’ time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment, which are essential for their physical and mental health. Besides, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another,tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. Most important of all,some teachers are eager to help pupils do well on the test,offering the so-called tips for test—taking rather than help them acquire what is most needed.
Through the above analysis, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice,on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils’ potentialities. Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.
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There are many factors that may account for/contribute to/responsible for the reason why...,but the following are the most typical ones.First,...besides/furthermore/moreover/in addition/what’s more,...most important of all/above all,...
All in all/in conclusion,...
【范文】 Why I Took Geography as My Major
There are many factors that may account for the reason why I took geography as my major, but the following are the most typical ones.
First,the problem of global environment pollution is serious. Each year, a lot of people die from it. Therefore,I decide to learn geography to do something to make the world cleaner. Furthermore, our great China has many resources that have not been found yet. As a chinese,I think I can use my knowledge of geography to make full use of these resources. Most important of all, the horizon of geography is very wide. It includes physics,chemistry and other fields. I can become more knowledgeable by taking geography as my major.
In conclusion,I take geography because I really like it and I am sure this major will help me become a useful person.
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Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem,but the following ones may be most effective. First of all,...Besides,/Another way to solve the problem of...is...Finally,...
These are not the best and the only two/three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take strong actions to...
【范文】How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic
With the booming of the motor industry,there are an increasing number of vehicle on the roads.As a result,traffic jams often occur.
Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem,but the following ones may be most effective.First of all,roads should be broadened to lower the degree of congestion and to speed up the flow of heavy traffic.Another way to solve the problem of heavy traffic is to open up more bus routes to reduce bikes and automobiles.Finally,more underground passages should be developed so that people can commute by metro.
These are not the best and the only two/three measures we can take.But it should be noted that the government takes some strong actions to alleviate the traffic problem,all of us can enjoy more free flowing traffic.
When we.../you,we.../you will be faced with the choice between A and B.Before making the right choice,we/you had better make a close comparison and contrast of them.
First of all,A...Also,B...Second,A...Likewise,B...Despite their similarities,A and B are also different in the following aspects.First,A...However,B...Besides,A...On the contrary,B...
Therefore,it depends which...we/you should choose,If we/you...,we/you should choose A;but if we/you...,we/you should turn to B.
【范文】Traveling by Train or by Plane
When we go on a business trip,we will be faced with the choice between traveling by train or by plane.Before making the right choice,we had better make a close comparison and contrast of them.
First of all,a train will take us to our target railway station.Also,a plane will take us to the target airport.Second,in a train we can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the countryside.Likewise,in a plane we can command a good view of fields,buildings,mountains and even clouds below.Despite their similarities,traveling by train or by plane are also different in the following aspects.First,a train ticket is less expensive.Most of us can afford it.However,a plane ticket is about twice as expensive as a train ticket.Most of us grudge paying for it.Besides,it is safer to travel by train.If the train gets into trouble,we may survive by jumping out of it.On the contrary,if we travel by plane,we have to ask God to bless us.Finally,it takes us longer time to travel by train than by plane.
Therefore,it depends which transportation tool we should choose.If we just want to save money,we will travel by train;but if we want to save time,we should turn to the plane.
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