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Beyond Expectations
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Beyond Expectations

By Milt Garrett

It seems a cardealership[t1] in my hometown ofAlbuquerque[t2] was selling, on

average, six to eight new cars a day, six days a week. I was also told that 72 percent of this dealership's first-time visitors returned for a second visit. (At that time, the average for all dealerships in Albuquerque for second-time visitors was 8 percent.)

I was curious andintrigue[t3] d. How does a car dealership get 72 percent of its first-time visitors to return? And how can they sell six to eight cars a day in aslump[t4] ingcar market?

When I walked intoSaturn[t5] of Albuquerque that Friday four years ago, the

staff there didn't know me fromAdam; yet they shared with me their pricing policy, the profit margin on every model, and staff income. They even opened their training manuals for my review and invited me back on Saturday if I wanted more information (an invitation Iheartilyaccepted).

I learned that this dealership (like all Saturn dealerships) has a "no-dicker[t6] 

sticker[t7] " policy; that is, the price on the window is the price you pay for the car.Period[t8] . You can't evennegotiate for a free set of floormat[t9] s. Saturnabide[t10] s by itspremise[t11] of selling high-quality automobiles for a reasonable price.

Furthermore, Saturn salesconsultant[t12] s(their term for customer-contact people) aren't paid a commission - they're salaried. This means when you walk onto the showroom floor you're notbombard[t13] edwith what I refer to as "beyond eager" sales people.

I expanded my research to other dealerships in Albuquerque. It turned out

that Ford Escorts, LTDs and Thunderbirds, as well as the Mercury Marquis, were also sold as "no-dicker sticker" cars. As Bruce Sutherland at Richardson Ford said, "We were losing our market to Saturn because of their pricing and salary policies." He also said, "If we all did what Saturn was doing, we'd not only make adecent[t14] living, but we'd alsoenjoy a better reputation[t15] ."

On Sunday, the day after my second visit to the Saturn store (their term, not mine), my wife, Jane, and I were walking as we frequently do. On this particular June morning, Jane gentlyslipped her hand in mine [t16] and said tenderly, "I don't know if you remember, but today's my fifth anniversary of being cancer-free." She wasdiagnose[t17] dwith breast cancer five years ago and hadundergone[t18] surgery. I was stunned, partially because I was embarrassed that I had forgotten, and, partially, because...well, it seems we spend all of our time earning a living and never stop to live our earnings. I mean, isn't this what it's really all about?

I didn't know what to do with Jane's information. I spoke to her tenderly. All day. I took her to lunch. I bought the lunch. It was a nice, intimate day. The next day, Monday, Jane went off to work teaching school. Still beside

myself not knowing what to do to mark this special occasion, I did the mostimpetuous[t19] thing I've ever done in my life: I bought a new Saturn. I bought everyaccessory[t20] they produce in Springhill, Tennessee, to hang on that car. There wasn't an accessory made that I didn't buy. I didn't pick the color and I didn't pick the model, but I paid cash and told them I'd bring Jane in on Wednesday at 4:30 to make those two decisions. I told them why I was buying the car, and that it was my secret and they were not toreveal anythingto[t21] her.

Tuesday morning, it dawned on me that Jane always wanted a white car. I

called our sales consultant at Saturn, and I asked him if he had anything white in the store. He said he had one left but he couldn't guarantee it'd still be available Wednesday at 4:30 because they were selling so fast. I said I'd take my chances and asked him to put it in the showroom.

Wednesday came and went. Unexpectedly, someone in our family was

admitted to the hospital. So, it wasn't until 9:30 Saturday morning when, after telling Jane the biggest lie to get her out of the house, we finally made our way to the Saturn store. I quickly turned into the parking lot and Jane angrily asked, "What are you doing? You promised me we'd get home right away." I said, "I'm sorry, I forgot I have to pick up something here for my Kiwanis speech next week."

Jane had never been in a Saturn store. When we went through the front door, the Lord took control of her feet and her mouth. She saw that little white Saturncoupe[t22] all the way across the showroom floor. She quickly passed a multi-colored sea of automobiles, sat in the little white Saturn and said, "Oh, what a pretty little car. Can I have a new car?" I said, "No. Not until Charlie graduates from college." Our son, Charlie, was attending the University of New South Wales in

Sydney, Australia (we call that "out of state[t23] "tuition[t24] ). She said, "I'm sick and tired of driving that old Dodge, I want a new car." I said, "I promise, just three moresemester[t25] sand he'll be out."

Next, Jane walked around to the front of the car. As she looked it over, she let out the mostblood-curdling,shrill scream I'd ever heard in 29 years of marriage.

Now, before I tell you why Jane screamed, let me tell you what our sales

consultant had done. He had ordered a large, professionallyengravedsign (white letters on blue) andaffixed the Saturn company logo on it. The sign stood alone on thehood of the little white Saturn coupe. It said "Congratulations, Jane. This car is yours. Five years cancer-free. Let's celebrate life. From Milt, Billy and Team Saturn"

Every employee at Saturn of Albuquerque hadendorse[t26] d the back of that sign. Jane saw it, screamed,collapsed in my arms[t27] andbawl[t28] ed her eyes out. I didn't know what to do. I was in tears. I took out myinvoice [t29] from the previous Monday, unfolded it and, pointing to the white coupe, said, "No, honey, this car isn't yours. I bought you this one." I tapped the invoice with my index finger. Jane said, "No, I want this one right here." Charlie, who was home from college and with us, said, "No, Mom. Dad bought you anything you want in Springhill, Tennessee or anything on the lot here." Jane said, "You don't understand, I want this one."

While this conversation was going on, I looked around and discovered that there was no one in the store. Our sales consultant had arranged it so that we could share the moment alone. Themechanic[t30] s, theclerical[t31] staff, the front-desk receptionist, management and all sales consultants had left the store for thesanctity[t32] of our event.

Even so, it's impossible to have a lot of privacy when so many people are

standing outside the showroom windows looking in. When Jane screamed and collapsed in my arms, I saw everybody outside applaud and begin to cry. Every new customer that came to the store in those minutes was not allowed to enter; instead, the staff took them aside and explained what was happening.

Jane never drove the car until she took it through the showroom door that day to drive it home. Over the years, I've told this story in the United States, Australia and Indonesia as an example oflegendary[t33] service. A woman in my audience in San Francisco from Anchorage, Alaska, heard the story; she called Saturn of Albuquerque long distance and bought a new car. It's like Ken Blanchard says, "It's only the stories told about us thatdifferentiate[t34] us in the market place."


 [t1]['di:ləˌʃip] 

n.代理权,经销权,代理商

 [t2]['ælbəkə:ki] 

n.阿尔伯克基(美国城市)

 [t3]intrigue(INTEREST) /ɪnˈtriːg/

verb[T]
to interest someone a lot, especially by being strange, unusual or mysterious

 [t4](REDUCE SUDDENLY)/slʌmp/

verb[I]
(of prices, values or sales) to fall suddenly

 [t5]['sætə(:)n] 

Saturn

n.土星

n. [罗神]农神

 [t6]/ˈdɪkə(r); ˋdɪkɚ/v [I, Ipr]~ (with sb) (for sth)argue (with the seller) about the price of sth; haggle(与卖主)讲价钱;讨价还价

 [t7]sticker 

/ˈstɪkə(r); ˋstɪkɚ/n
sticky label with a picture or message on it
(有黏胶的)图文标签

 [t8](用于句末,表示断定的口气)就这样,没什么好说的
I love him,period!
我爱他,就是这样!

 [t9]/mæt; mæt/n
(a) piece of material, made of straw, rushes, fibre, etc, used to cover part of a floor
;
a small piece of strong material which covers and protects part of a floor:

 [t10]/əˈbaɪd; əˋbaɪd/v (pt,ppabided; in sense 3用於下述第3义时作abode/əˈbəud; əˋbod/)
[Tn] (esp withcan/could, in negative sentences or questions
尤於否定句或疑问句中与can/could连用) tolerate (sb/sth); endure; bear容忍(某人[某事物];忍受;忍耐:

 [t11](alsopremiss) /ˈpremɪs; ˋprɛmɪs/n
statement or idea on which reasoning is based; hypothesis
(推理所依据的)前提;假定

 [t12]/ kənˈsʌltənt; kənˋsʌltənt/ n

 ~ (on sth) person who gives expert advice (in business, law, etc)(商业﹑ 法律等方面的)顾问

 [t13]bɔmˈbɑːd; bɑmˋbɑrd/ v [Tn, Tn.pr] ~ sb/sth (with sth) 1 (a) attack (a place) with bombs or shells (esp from big guns)轰炸(某地);炮轰(某地)

 [t14]satisfactory; quite good令人满意的;相当好的:earn a decent wage, living, etc赚可观的工资﹑生活费等*

 [t15]a good expression

 [t16]a good expreesion

 [t17]/ˈdaɪ.əg.nəʊz/ US /ˌdaɪ.əgˈnoʊz/

verb [T]

to recognize and name the exact character of a disease or a problem, by making an examination

 [t18]ˏʌndəˈgəu; ˏʌndɚˋɡo/v (ptunderwent/-ˈwent; -ˋwɛnt/,ppundergone/-ˈgɔn; US -ˈgɔːn; -ˋɡɔn/)[Tn]
experience or endure (sth unpleasant or painful)
经历,经受(不愉快的或痛苦的某事物):

 [t19]ɪmˈpetʃuəs; ɪmˋpɛtʃʊəs/adjacting or done quickly and with little thought or care; rash or impulsive轻率的;鲁莽的;冲动的

 [t20]accessory 

/əkˈsesərɪ; əkˋsɛsərɪ/n
(usupl
通常作复数) (a) thing that is a useful or decorative extra but that is not essential; minor fitting or attachment附属品;配件;附件

 [t21]揭露

 [t22]/ˈkuːpeɪ; kuˋpe/n
(UScoupe /
kuːp; kup/) two-door car with a sloping back(斜背双门的)汽车.
closed horse-drawn carriage with an inside seat for two people and an outside seat for the driver
双座轿式马车(内有两人座位,外有驭者席).

 [t23]adjective
[only before noun] (AmE) coming from or happening in a different state

 [t24]tuition 

/tjuːˈɪʃn; US tuː-; tuˋɪʃən/n[U] (a) (esp fml尤作文雅语) teaching or instruction, esp that given to individuals or small groups教学,讲授(尤指对个人或小组的):have private tuition in French 私人教授法语. (b) fee paid for this, esp in colleges and universities学费(尤指大专院校的).

 [t25]/sɪˈmestə(r); səˋmɛstɚ/n(esp in US universities and colleges) either of the two divisions of the academic year(尤指美国的大专院校的)学期(半学年):the summer/winter semester 夏季[冬季]学期. Cf参看term 3.

 [t26]/ɪnˈdɔːs; ɪnˋdɔrs/v [Tn]
write one's name on the back of (esp a cheque)
在(尤指支票)的背面签字

 [t27]A good expression

 [t28]/bɔːl; bɔl/v
[I, Ipr, Ip, Tn, Tn.pr, Tn.p]~ (sth) (out)shout or cry loudly
大叫;大喊

 [t29]/ˈɪnvɔɪs; ˋɪnvɔɪs/n~ (for sth)(commerce) list of goods sold or services provided with the price(s) charged, esp sent as a bill发票;发货清单;服务费用清单

 [t30]/ mɪˈkænɪk; məˋkænɪk/ n worker skilled in using or repairing machines or tools技工;机修工

 [t31]/ ˈklerɪkl;ˋklɛrɪkl/ adj

 of, for or made by a clerk(1) or clerks文书或办事员的

 [t32]/ˈsæŋktətɪ; ˋsæŋktətɪ/n[U] holiness; sacredness神圣;庄严

 [t33]legend1 

legend(STORY) /ˈledʒ.ənd/

noun[C orU]
a very old story or set of stories from ancient times, or the stories, not always true, that people tell about a famous event or person

 [t34]/ˏdɪfəˈrenʃɪeɪt; ˏdɪfəˋrɛnʃɪˏet/v
(a) [Ipr, Tn, Tn.pr]~ between A and B;~ A (from B)see or show (two things) to be different; show sth to be different (from sth else)
看出或指出(两者)不同;辨别;区别;区分

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